Talk:Death Note- Tick Tock: Chapter 1/@comment-5067481-20120902062532

Ok, this is my very first fanfic, over. So ther's probably thousands of things wrong with it. But oh well *shrug* Sorry its so long, im new to writing >.< I'll try to make my stories less long and less boring next time. Im tired and the idea just sprang into my head, so i had to do it now. Please keep in mind this is my first fanfic, so thats one reason why it sucks. Next chapter coming soon!