Talk:The Living Dead Chapter 1: Ground Zero/@comment-5142849-20130717204314

The writing is pretty good, but the story has been done multiple times before. I hope you can add some twists and turns and do something like the novel "World War Z" (that's a great book by the way, the film's pretty bad though) rather than just be a "Walking Dead" clone.

It's well-written though, and I'm sure it gets better since this is only the first chapter.